This is a definite improvement.
I loved the shots where you'd still frame, then zoom in or out then continue the action. And some of the surfing skills are superb.
I did think the beginning bit went on far too long. I realise that the shots on land are the best (only) opportunities to get close ups of the people and equipment, but I preferred it when you just inserted some of these into the action (eg 4:17). I very nearly bailed out before the action.
Another niggle - it's not generally good practice to go back on yourself within a shot - eg pan one way and then the other (unless you're following action) or zoom in then back out as you have at 1:50.
But I think you've caught the action really well and managed to zoom into the action pretty well too.
nice insert shots, great picture quality what camera ? bit too much zooming imo. good choice of music but i do feel the editing could have been a touch snappier with the second music track ?
thanks thanks the cam is Sony nex-5 18-200mm
Nice work - For me I'd like to hear some of the sounds of the beach integrated into your soundtrack - The gulls, the waves, general ambience would add so much to this I think. Also might be worth you investing in a cheap monopod just to help smooth out some of your shots.
Otherwise - Love it. Nice little movie.