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    Hi All!

    Here is a short film "Boxed Man" I wrote and directed. It is finished but I would still be happy to have any feedback and thoughts on it. And if you have any questions shoot away.



    HD - 2'18"
    2011
    Roll With It Productions

    Cheers,

    Merlyn

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    Nice one, As I feel like I'm in a box today, I felt it was very poignant and pertinent.

    Good job.

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    Pretty good. Nice idea. Very nicely filmed and edited. If I were to change anything I'd make the "shouty" voice less shouty and more pathetically desperate. Thoe shouty/angry just seemd more amateur than the reesto f it.
    Tim

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    nice colour work, nice pace.....excellent ! tramp taking advantage of the abandoned car made me giggle !
    Last edited by enc; 04-14-2011 at 07:37 PM.

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