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    Hey guys, been a while but I've got a few exciting details! First i've got several new films on the way and this is the first one of the list titled CLOCKED OUT.
    It's about a secret division in police departments who find people from the future (non-educational reasons) who take advantage of lotteries, stocks etc. This was a fun 48 hour project and hope you all enjoy it!
    More films will be released by next week, so look out for those. I'll be creating a production thread for my first feature on here soon too.


    CLOCKED OUT
    12 Minutes
    Viewer discretion is advised.


    SCREENSHOT


    (Shot on one 5D Mark II, edited on Premiere, After effects)



    Also if you missed it, DISCONNECTED intro (Full film on my channel) VIDEO DELETED
    And the trailer for AS I AM to be released next week. VIDEO DELETED


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    C'mon FC, you've been around here enogh to know the rules. One video per thread.

    I know the others were only trailers, but no doubt some bright spark would start commenting in this thread about them and then confusion would reign.

    I'll take a look at Clocked Out tomorrow.
    Tim

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    Ah, i didn't realize trailers would count as one. My bad!

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    Quote Originally Posted by FCRabbath View Post
    Ah, i didn't realize trailers would count as one. My bad!
    No worries. It's only to avoid mixing up comments. Feel free to post them in other threads.
    Tim

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    Interesting concept, good use of security cameras, unusual exposure in places, sound a bit in and out. BUT mostly very good indeed.

    Don't taze me Bro.

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    Thanks for watching Blue!

    Look forward to it tim.

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    Nice job. Just one question - how did Frankie manage to miss her with that first shot in the supermarket?

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    Well she wasn't that close. Plus he tries a little to kill them in a more private setting. Thanks for watching!

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    Nice looking film. Kept my interest throughout, but I must've missed something as it didn't resolve for me. What was the guy getting out of the pool and the guy having a wash (same guy?)? What's the "two hours, till then". Clearly I'm stoopid, but I wouldn't mind an explanation.
    I liked the chase scene - the variety of different ways of shooting chase that you got into those few seconds.
    Tim

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    Hey thanks for watching,
    he was indeed the same guy, they travel time through water. Basically they keep coming back to find ways to steal money and re group to get out. This organization keeps blocking them from doing that as in the future there is no crossing the border to mexico but now crossing the border through time. Hope that helps!

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