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    Sorry Moldy this just didn't work for me. I couldn't hear the dialogue very well and what I could hear didn't seem very funny. There is a typo at the end the word stabbed is written shived. It's also very long.

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    Sorry - good attempt but few things spoiled it for me (maybe because I am a Brit - so humour didnt cross Atlantic! - although I do know what "shived" means!!)

    Dialogue too quiet - esp with all that tin foil rattling!!

    Sound effects were poor - esp on the roof footsteps

    I agree with Midnight - it was too long

    Not too sure about the voice over at the end. I can read!!

    Good attempt though and thanks for letting us see it

    John

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    I liked it! I don't think I could watch it a second time, and the sound was indeed poor, but it was very left field and, maybe because I've just got in and settled down with a glass of cheap Merlot, I was in the mood for it.
    There were some bizarre twists: Margaret Thatcher's "Gone with the Wind" not only creased me up but had me going off on a philosphical tangent.
    I loved the very British voice over at the end.

    I presume you had a mistaken delivery of a shed load of aluminium (that's aluminum) foil and wondered what to do with it.
    Tim

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    thanks. I agree with what you guys are saying.

    I had a limited amount of time to shot and edit it.... i could have been better for sure.

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