I think you did a good job with this. A nice mix of footage etc, you manage a sort of narrative especially the beginning was good. One thing I would suggest is to loose some of the colour tints you used like the green one at 28 seconds. Another thing is towards the end it was getting a bit samey, in fact repeating the clips should tell you it's time you ended the video. Remember editing is about taking out as well as putting in.
Hello, I begin again with THANKS, THANKS, for opinion, that for me count a lot. About the colors you have right but it was a experiment, to fined out how it would look. But you are wright and next time I gone repair that. I'am always hungry about critics. But it is also nice to have sometimes a weldone from somebody I have respect. Thank you.