looks like you got bored an afternoon and went out with your camcorder
would you watch this video yourself ? if you did, would you enjoy it ?
sorry I come a little harsh but I didn't see anything interesting or funny, looks like a bored person with a camcorder who spent the evening playing with an editing software, I didn't learn anything and there's not much else for me to say about this clip.
what you need is some inspiration, some ambition, some time and a good collection of movies to watch.
Now again, it might be some chef d'oeuvre here and I don't see it, but if the public doesn't understand it, is it still called "art"? does it still have a point? and what public is this for to begin with?
challenge yourself, try and reproduce famous scenes you like from other movies, I don't know, but if you do something, do it seriously, give it some thoughts, plan your work ahead, be ambitious and don't avoid difficulty.
And don't show clips that you wouldn't watch or enjoy yourself, I don't see many reasons why you would enjoy this clip yourself
1. you're blind, or lying to yourself
2. you never seen a movie or even a TV commercial in your life
3. you never accepted criticism therefore never had the chance to make progress
The last reason would be, I don't get it and in fact it is pure creative genius, but I think I've seen enough, various, films, movies, clips whatever in my life so I'm pretty sure it's not an issue, but who knows.
but then again, what's the point of doing something that even a fairly educated person wouldn't even get a hold on?
I actually think the main joke - both guys hiding behind different side of the same tree - has some promise. But to make this work, it either has to be much shorter (like a 20-30 second sketch) or needs some serious development.