I'm a budding film maker on youtube and have just put up my first (very) short film. I would love to know your opinions on how I could improve it. The plot isn't as tight as I would have liked to be, but unfortunately it was the only thing I could work with. There was also to be a third alternate ending but I forgot to turn on the camera when shooting it .
The music is just some basic loops from garageband - unfortunately music isn't my strong suit.
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Any advice and criticism is more than welcome,
Thank You in advance,