As usual, Mike, very nicely shot. A much more laid back feel to it I thought. This was particularly unusual for a film with machinery in it where one might expect a more busy feel. I liked that. There was a bit too much shallow DOF for my liking, but I accept that's just my taste being out of step with the current trend.
This also had a bit more of an obvious narrative to it than some of your other works, I was a bit lost with the drawing (crossword?) though - it didn't seem to lead anywhere or did I miss an element in the design?