kids fighting...

**moldytoaster** · 03-17-2005, 09:16 PM

all this is is kids fighting, Nothing mutch but here you go...

http://www.neptune.com/users/twj3/vi...twj3252063.wmv

**Marc Peters** · 03-17-2005, 09:28 PM

Was this intentionally bad?

**Eason** · 03-17-2005, 09:30 PM

Originally Posted by Marc Peters

Was this intentionally bad?

I pose the same question as Marc.

**moldytoaster** · 03-17-2005, 09:33 PM

yeah, my friend shot about 2 hours of stuff for me and all it is, is that so i just took a few parts and after editing for about 10 minutes that is what i have, i know it sucks, but i thought you people might find it interesting, and since no one posted anything about my last video i just thought, why not...

**Marc Peters** · 03-17-2005, 09:36 PM

Spruce it up a bit. Learn from the other videos posted and add some *kick* to it.

**Tony A** · 03-17-2005, 10:21 PM

I agree, this is not good stuff, Moldy. You can do better than this - you must've had a basic idea at the start.

What about (a) a little intro? (b) some attention to your cuts? Try some transitions. (c) some appropriate music, off-beat maybe, or just plain erratic; [d] apply a theme, or some context?

Only suggestions, but little things give a video short the air of a 'finished piece'.

**moldytoaster** · 03-17-2005, 10:37 PM

Originally Posted by tone33

I agree, this is not good stuff, Moldy. You can do better than this - you must've had a basic idea at the start.

What about (a) a little intro? (b) some attention to your cuts? Try some transitions. (c) some appropriate music, off-beat maybe, or just plain erratic; [d] apply a theme, or some context?

Only suggestions, but little things give a video short the air of a 'finished piece'.

A- I sort of added one
B- I dont really like transitions
C- Good idea, i did
D- I am still working on that

Again this was not shot but be, and i put almost no time into editing this but here you go.. Reedited, kids fighting

http://www.neptune.com/users/twj3/vi...twj3252229.wmv