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    Default Guns n' Magics battle

    it is a battle sence with guns and magics



    enjoy

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    wow, amazing... but you need to improve your english...

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    I don't see why you have to improve your English. Just practice the language of film.
    I won't comment on the FX which seemed OK, but you really need to learn about crossong the line/continuity of action.
    In many of these edits you show total disregard for who was last approaching from which side of the screen. For example if someone is moving left you should never cut immediately to a shot of him moving right.

    SImilarly the shots early on of the guy reaching in his pockets for his guns. You show him from the left immediately followed by showing him fom the right. You cannot see both sides of a person in real life without moving from one side to the other (which can be implied in film by showing a cutaway) so you should not do so in film.
    Tim

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    thank you ^
    i understand it know.
    more?

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    more comments?

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