Hello all, just finished the basics of this intro. I'm known in the community for using dubstep in my gameplay videos, and using rather rash dubstep in my intros. Just want to see what you guys think of the editing and where and what I can do better.

You will not get the first part of the intro unless you play eveonline, but lets just say something really funny happened (we were about to jump on some people, the system they were in was too far away and we didn't notice this as we stalked them for hours).