It has a nice over all look. I think the editing needs tightening up. Example the shot that starts at 1:37 it goes on farrrrr to long, 20 seconds of nothing is a long time to wait to see something in focus. It was a good idea to start the shot like that but as the car drove in to shot it should have been in focus without adjusting the focus ring. A couple of seconds of that shot is plenty long enough before the other car comes into shot.
I liked that you did some dolly shots but thought at 1:45 the one way then the other wasn't a good idea. I loved that you have tried new ideas like at 2:00, the bit where you do a pan and then pick up the tripod then another smooth pan and again pick up the tripod etc. Although this was an interesting idea it shouldn't have the hosepipe pan (pan right then left).
The quality of the shots is really nice and you have a good eye for a shot. But need to work on the editing. I think this video should be cut down to under 2 mins. That's what editing is all about.