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Thread: My first Typography Video

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    Default My first Typography Video

    I was just thinking if you guys could give me some feedback


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    Some nice graphics, but I think it's longer than it needs to be.

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    I agree with martchap. There are some long boring bits (the letters wandering almost offscreen).
    Around 0:04 are letters apparently appearing from nowhere. I suggest some feathered masking to remove the obvious fact that the letters are appearing from withing a basic rectangular mask.
    Around 0:24 we get words dropping over each other. It might look more interesting if the top or bottom word reacted (e.g. glowing). It currently looks a little messy.

    Hoping my comments are helpful.

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    I would say 10 seconds max for an intro logo unless you are putting it in front of a long film. Also the audio seemed very over dramatic. This will not be right for some videos.

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    thanks for the comments I was just experimenting yet could you suggest some music of which you feel is more suited

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    I would personally go for something neutral but I sometimes put something that is fitting with the piece it's going in front of.

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    Thanks I'll bare that in mind when I get round to editing it again

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    If you could cut it down to 3 second then it would be great.

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