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    Post My Early trailers

    [ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vxGGHpsYZGU"]YouTube - Dry Blood[unoffical tralier][/ame]

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    [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m8Fkih2IrVs]YouTube - how 2 fail[/ame]

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    Nice nob tap
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    The trailer is truly appaling.
    Only six lines and spelling/grammar mistakes in four of them.
    2 familys should be 2 families
    Hidden secrets reviled should be hidden secrets revealed (or possibly relived)
    Unless you are actually talking about something belonging to the families, The Winsky's and The Buranton's should be the Winskys and The Burantons

    In case you think I'm being overly fussy - film is a form of communication. If you can't be bothered to correct simple mistakes in your trailer, why would anyone think you've made any effort with your main feature?

    We're all capable of making these mistakes - I do it regularly, but it's one thing doing it in an off-the-cuff post to a forum and another in something which should be the best you can produce. If you have difficulty with spelling or aren't sure - get someone else to check it out.
    Tim

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    Quote Originally Posted by TimStannard View Post
    The trailer is truly appaling.
    Only six lines and spelling/grammar mistakes in four of them.
    2 familys should be 2 families
    Hidden secrets reviled should be hidden secrets revealed (or possibly relived)
    Unless you are actually talking about something belonging to the families, The Winsky's and The Buranton's should be the Winskys and The Burantons

    In case you think I'm being overly fussy - film is a form of communication. If you can't be bothered to correct simple mistakes in your trailer, why would anyone think you've made any effort with your main feature?

    We're all capable of making these mistakes - I do it regularly, but it's one thing doing it in an off-the-cuff post to a forum and another in something which should be the best you can produce. If you have difficulty with spelling or aren't sure - get someone else to check it out.



    ok thanks for the tips i just thought i spelt it correctly next time ill be more careful in spelling

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    Quote Originally Posted by bigben654321 View Post
    Um...Yeah.

    Ignoring the spelling errors, let's talk about the actual video content.

    Video 1 = Very simple but it kind of works, where did you get the last image from? Perhaps an image that fills the screen a bit more would have been better?...

    Video 2 = What is the point of the video? It's just a random collection of images...1000s of youtubers do this kind of thing. Step out from the mob and perhaps add some comic voiceover next time. Oh, and why did you feel the compulsion to use "Bring me to life" as the backing track?!?
    i had it as a backing track because my origanal track was removed due to copyright and i was origenally do a voice over but i screwed it up many times so i gave up

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    my new trailer for there coming closer
    there may be no audio so sorry if u dont have it


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    Shouldn't a trailer show some footage of the movie ?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Midnight Blue View Post
    Shouldn't a trailer show some footage of the movie ?
    yes it should but we dont start filming until august

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