Added Fri 9th April:
I have now finished the video, so I thought I'd just update this rather than creating a new thread.
I took some advice and I've held longer on a umber of shots, removing some of the quicker clips. I feel it does look a lot better now because of it, but I shall let you all decide.
So sarah & allison said I've got to do another music video for this girl, but do it properly! So this is it!
That said, the shoot had some problems in there were only two crew, I did my very best to get someone else in to help but to no avail and it was the only day that the talent and myself could both do it.
We came up against some issues with lighting too, well, we filmed two videos for two songs, my friend DOP'd the first and I DOP'd the second (this video). However I wasn't overly happy with the position of the lighting he had set up for his shoot but I didn't have any time left to change it for my shoot. This has resulted in shadows cast by us and the crane.
The lack of an extra person also limited the variety of shots as both of us manned the dolly and had to leave some of the takes purely static.
But for get in for an on location shoot, set up, 2 video shoot and extras (recorded very basic video for a third song) and get out all by 5pm and with only two crew, it isn't half bad.
But all things considered I'm really happy with the outcome so far.
Ok so this is NOT the final version, I would really value your feedback and will be making changes. I've already spotted some changes I need to make and I'm sure you guys will point out more. Also, I know I need to work on some of the colour balancing.
**Please note song contains one use of the F word**
Pre-Final version now removed.