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    Thumbs up Dance video

    Hi, recently just got serious about filming/editing. Just last Tuesday in fact
    Tell me what you think
    [ame="http://vimeo.com/8862208"]Dance: Amazing - Kanye West [Nikon D90] on Vimeo[/ame]
    Last edited by Dolo; 01-23-2010 at 07:46 AM.

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    For some reason, the gentleman's head goes of the frame from time to time.
    In the credits, Mr J Arimado's surname appears in lowercase.
    There are no credits for the 'music'.
    Does it make me want a Nikon? Not really.

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    Camera mounted on a tripod poorly composed occasionally cutting off the head of the "dancer".

    One shot. No cuts, edits or effects.

    Not exactly what i would call being serious about editing or filming.

    Next!

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    i like the lighting/colour FX on this, however as others have pointed out there's not enough variation in the shots.... as a start try cutting in some close ups.

    i noticed in one of your other videos, though your camera is mounted on a tripod its not level. does your camera have a built in level ?

    i think your ideas are there... just needs a little work
    Last edited by enc; 01-24-2010 at 06:45 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by The Gaffer View Post
    Camera mounted on a tripod poorly composed occasionally cutting off the head of the "dancer".
    To say nothing of the arms!

    Quote Originally Posted by The Gaffer View Post
    One shot. No cuts, edits or effects.
    Come, come, Mr Gaffer. There was that awful DOF effect which really bugged me as I found the various DIY bits and pieces were seeking my attention, but I couldn't make them out.

    Quote Originally Posted by The Gaffer View Post
    Not exactly what i would call being serious about editing or filming.

    Next!
    Can't disagree with you there.
    Tim

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    Well - if u were naked maybe....

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    Quote Originally Posted by vertovian View Post
    Well - if u were naked maybe....


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