A few months ago we originally posted this travelogue about our 7-day Greek cruise. We received some very useful and valuable feedback from this forum, at that time, and have applied that feedback into our final cut. As a result, the length of this feature has been reduced by over a minute. A completely new music score has been edited in (including an amplification of the opening theme). The result is a tighter production and a more polished presentation, in our opinion. For those of you who provided the initial feedback and help, I respectfully request that you watch this feature again to see if we have succeeded in our goal. If you have additional useful feedback, please let me know.
I'm planing to pitch this travelogue to the cruise line's Director of Product Development next week for inclusion in their website's Promotional pages. If they buy into it, this will our first commercial success.