I appreciate you guys taking your time to look at this thread. Also i hope i posted it in the right section.
I have put together a short video as a part of a marketing/communications class in order to promote our college. I have uploaded this video onto Youtube in order to get feedback from good people like yourselves. This has been done so that i can make any changes before i have to submit the final production(After Christmas). Basically we are getting graded on creativity, editing skills as well as effective communication. So any feedback would be great (good or bad)
I realise this is my first post here, but it was friend that told me to come here and ask for any advice/ suggestions , so any help is much appreciated.
The idea is based around a young guy leaving home for the first time in order to attend college in the "big smoke" (Dublin). In the video he plays hard, studies hard and comes out as a successful CEO.