Just for fun I had a half hour with my two grandsons last night and here's what they (we) came up with. Unfortunately, one of the light bulbs popped just before the action started, so excuse the shadows!
Tims such a hard task master but he is so often right.
Nah, I'm just a bully. I figure if I shout loud enough and with enough confidence people will believe me.
MBs silent movie was fascinating in that once we'd started a number of people chipped in with their ideas. (Though hopefully he didn't end up with a film designed by committee.
This forum is great for this sort of thing though. It can be easy to spot areas for improvement in other's films. When it comes to your own film though, perhaps something you've worked on for weeks, you're often too close to it to spot the obvious.
I very much appreciated the advice I receive here (and elsewhere) for my own efforts.