Hi and Welcome.
I have deleted your three other copies of this.
Please do not duplicate posts all over the forum.
I appreciate you are keen for people to see your students' work but spamming is hardly teaching them the right way to go about it. It is extremely annoying for regulars (or any users come to that) to come up against the same video in different sections. If you're worried it might be missed - post the video one and link to tyhat post in other sections.
I (and probably others) will be happy to give the videos a viewing and some constructive criticism when you've contributed some criticism on others' films yourself. One good turn ....