As with most of your stuff Mike, given that the shots are composed and photographed superbly, it's difficult to find anything to say about this. Interesting faces, sure, but it doesn't move me in any way (perhaps it's not meant to).
Whilst I'm sure the kiss looks great as a still, in the video it looked rather staged - the couple seemed rather self conscious.
However there was a real sense of mystery. I'm not sure if it was intentional or not, but is there any significance in the single dissolve among all the fades through black?
I would rather watch a poorly framed slightly out of focus and badly lit real smile than a beautifully shot fake one.
They are all getting a bit the same for me but what saddens me more is that I can't find any posts where you are helping others, come on Mike do your bit.