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    Hello,

    I have been lurking for a while and finally decided to post. I have been video filming and editing for about 6 months now and would like some feedback on my work. Thanks!

    Hot Spot:

    [ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_uQXOIz5XFw"]YouTube - Seaside Stop and Go "The Hot Spot"[/ame]

    Oh yeah and my commercial interest I guess is I'm trying to start a Video Production company and working on my skills doing commercials and music videos. I'm not looking to promote just looking for constructive critiscism.

    Thanks
    Last edited by Chapman Photography; 09-22-2009 at 06:37 AM.

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    I deleted all but the 1st video. Forum rules for posting videos is one video per thread, Please feel free to start other threads with your other videos
    Wil

    Software Used:
    TGV Edius 6, TGV ProCoder 3, DVD Lab Pro. 2

    http://www.youtube.com/user/ChapmanProduction

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    I liked it. If thats what you produced after only 6months of being involved in editing then I think you should be very pleased.

    The music was a little too loud for me and it masked what some of the people were saying. I wouldnt have used the guy at the petrol pump because his statement does not match his face LOL. Also the guy shaking something onto the food, is that a look of get out of my face? Not sure.

    Was this actually used as a promo for the store?

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    All that moving & wobbly camerawork made me a bit seasick and so I'm afraid I lost focus. By a minute I realised I wasn't actually paying any attention to it any more. There again I'm hardly your target audience!
    Tim

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    Yeah I own two convenience stores and I made the video kinda as an online commercial. It was done with a handy cam and imovie, so quality sucks, but it was my first video and I think I have improved a bit since then.

    I got the Sony HDR HD camera the other day and I'm using Final Cut Studio now so I'm definitely getting cleaner.

    Thanks for the feedback!!

    Seth

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    Nice to see you back. When are we goiing to see some of the new improved work?
    Tim

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    Nicely edited, Very well put together BUT I hate that song. Hate it, Hate it..........

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    I got a new one I'm pretty proud of. I will post a couple on the forum. thanks for the interest!!

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