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    I'm almost done with this movie and i'm looking for some feedback

    [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0PCzn9HAR_Q]YouTube - Silver Cell Scene 2[/ame]
    Regards William Victor Schotten
    http://www.schottenfilmworks.com

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    I'm no expert, but it looks very well composed, shot and edited. Like the light bloom effect too... Music fitted very well.

    Of course, with the experience of the global financial meltdown, we all know now that the line should be "And this is how the world ends, not with a whim, but with a banker'

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    Interesting trailer as it leaves the audience wondering what happened for this scenario to take place. The curiosity level should be enough to get people to watch the full version. Part of the actresses speech is slightly muffled and the shot of the sky and the pan down to her is taking too long, half a second could easily be trimmed off it as the sky is totally blown out. In other words it's an empty frame. The colour work is very good and the camera movements are smooth.

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    Very nice. I especially liked how you tied the words of the person speaking to the music. By the way, where did you get that song?

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    the shot of the sky and the pan down to her is taking too long,
    I agree made the trim and it worked well. thanks for making that suggestion. The sound will be re-recorded as will all of the exterior sound. That just our scratch track.

    where did you get that song?
    I purchased it from "Smartsound" its part of the Richard Band series and its all royalty free once you license it.
    SmartSound Professional Quality Music Libraries

    And this is how the world ends, not with a whim, but with a banker'
    I think you may be right!
    Regards William Victor Schotten
    http://www.schottenfilmworks.com

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