Last edited by oilmanrich; 10-16-2009 at 06:49 PM. Reason: title change
LOL is was funny and scary at the same time !
You did some color correction to boost the contrast right ? It was well done. Good choice of music too.
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Sorry for my bad english im french
so wait...did the kid suck the janitor's dick or not?
There's a lot I liked. The story was intriguing left a lot of unanswered questions (which is good in a short like this)
The music went with the action really well.
One criticism. Get a tripod! particularly those opening scenes really were shaky. Handheld shots are fine for following the action. But you really need a stable platform for a lot of those shots.
I like the idea of someone being convinced of something and someone else trying to persuade him that he's wrong, and it works well when the first someone is convinced, rightly or wrongly, that a day is a certain day.
This has happened to me a couple of times, so at least the idea resonates with somebody. Maybe you could take the idea further.
I didn't like the shaky shots either, I now pack a little table top tripod in my rucksack, I can usually stand it somewhere.
Anyway, I liked it, basically.