Please find attached my first draft for a 3-minute promotional video I am doing for a local video jockey for your perusal and critique. The video is eventually going to become a promotional DVD for the client (I'm being paid but only a very small amount to basically just cover my time so it's more of a favour really).
As it's just a first draft I'm aware that there are some compositing issues during the interview piece, and I think some of the clips could be better - there's some that are maybe too long but I just really wanted some feedback on what you thought of the overall feel, concept, presentation of the project. (Edited in Sony Vegas Pro . I'm hoping it's not too far off the mark??
If there are any suggestions as to how I could give the whole video a more professional 'sheen' I'd really appreciate it.
Thanks in advance for hopefully not completely shattering my confidence??
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