I recently completed this travelogue about Majorca for our club competition (it won, but there were only three entries). A bit tricky really as everyone has been there, so rather than try for a different angle I said from the off that it's a cliché family holiday with the standard tourist day out.
I don't expect anyone to watch all nine minutes (it becomes a pretty standard travelogue) but I'd appreciate comments on the intro/ first couple of minutes.
YouTube - A Day Out in Mallorca
Please forgive the shakey camerawork. I was under very strict instructions that filming (ie taking a tripod) was not to take priority over our holiday