Hmm. I guess I am not looking for comments on the actual content, just the editing probably.
One longish piece of poorly shot footage with mostly unintelligible sound (presumably going for the Blair Witch idea). One short burst of a static effect. A bit more of the original clip. Some more static. Blackout.
A total of four straight cuts.
They were all very good (what more can I say?)
If you want comment on the titles:
The Dolor Films looked neat (what software did you use? and was it a preset or did you create from scratch)
Presents was in a different font
Spookness was in yet another font and introduced with a totally different effect. And it was a horrid blue colour which matched neither the foregoing titles nor the forthcoming film (a green shade from the night-camera shots might have worked)
So, no attempts at any sort of consistency over the four words we've seen so far....
Credits - yet another font (again a neat titling effect. Software? Preset?) Though I think the final copyright notice matched the "presents" from earlier.
Six titles - four fonts - My first computer didn't have that many font!
I think I've exhausted pretty much all that may be said about the editing. I throw down a challenge to others to contribute!