Ok, one more.
this is a rough cut of one scene from a project that is in production. A quick synopsis... it is going to be a short film about a love triangle. the film will be split into three sections for the whole film. apart from this scene where the two characters are together. each character will be in a seperate section for the rest of the flm.
in this scene, the guy has met up with a girl that he is cheating on his girlfriend with, and is caught by his qirlfriend. (there is an empty section on the left for a majority of the scene as i havent filmed those clips yet)
it might not make any sense at all, really, im just loking for some crit on the filming/editing/sound/acting etc. as this is the first time ive attempted making a narrative piece.
YouTube - Breakup scene. Rough cut, split screen.