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    Hello,

    Here is a short video I put together about Poverty. If anyone is wondering I used Final Cut Express and LiveType to edit it.

    Let me know what you think of it.

    EDIT: Be sure to watch in high definition if your Internet speeds are capable.

    Last edited by shooting_rubber; 12-27-2008 at 07:42 AM.

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    Has anybody watched this yet? If so, what have you guys thought about it?

    Thanks.

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    We have many new posters who join the forum with a post in user vids.

    I am sure people will comment soon.

    I would enourage you to comment on other contributions rahter than just ask for feedback - it will have a more productive result. This section of the forum only works if we all help eachother out.

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    Nearly very good.

    Music - Excellent, I liked it and it worked well.

    Pictures - Maybe just a bit too much track motion, bit too busy.

    Text - Nearly a hit, just a miss. Nice text effects, very fashionable and contemporary, but overdone. Too much, makes the text hard to read, and it's all too fast. I hated the extreme track motion on the text - made an otherwise classy edit look cheap.

    Like I said nearly very presuasive - and these are hard to pull off.

    Looking at the wider picture - the whole ' pity the poor, feel guilty? Good. Give' message is becoming a bit of a cliche. Thinking of new ways to say old things is the trick.

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    Thanks for your comments on my video... It is really appreciated. I will attempt to fix the things you mentioned and then I will repost it.

    EDIT: This is also my first time using Final Cut Express.

    Thanks again.
    Last edited by shooting_rubber; 12-28-2008 at 09:34 PM.

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    Pretty impressive if you is a nooby.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mark W View Post
    Pretty impressive if you is a nooby.
    Well I have used other editing programs on a PC, but this is my first time using Final Cut.

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    Here is the new version. Let me know what you guys think:


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    so i liked it. though in one part you have the pictures flare when the guitar strums, but one of the minor strums doesn't get a minor flare. only little thing i noticed that threw me a bit

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    Quote Originally Posted by nivoset View Post
    so i liked it. though in one part you have the pictures flare when the guitar strums, but one of the minor strums doesn't get a minor flare. only little thing i noticed that threw me a bit
    Thanks for your input on my video. It is very much appreciated.

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