Good job over all I thought. Some things I noticed for improvement, In the shot of you standing on bridge, your head was not fully in frame, I usualy try and keep the top of the frame just above or right at the top of the head. I would also add some slow zoom in or out effects on some of the longer static shots. Also, the transistions seemed inconsistant, I think if you put some faster fades in a few of the transitions that have no efect you would get a more fluid feel. One last thing is the timing of the transistions could be more in time with the music, you can achieve more of rythym even with the slow sad music, just keep the trasitions more in time with the cord changes I think and you would get a better melding between the music and visuals. I dont know what editing program your using but most all of them come with zoom effects that you can slow down to give some of the transitions and static shots more feel. Just my opinion though. Still good job over all I thought.
Ryan AKA rgander1 AKA "the videobloggoligist"