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    Default First video advert!

    Hey Guys,

    I have just finished my new logo and have done a little edit for it, I just wanted to get some thoughs, feedback etc..

    Cheers MK

    YouTube - MKProductions Advert

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    Honestly? I'd have stopped it at two seconds... the rest is superfluous. The first two seconds gets the job done.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Andy Lockwood View Post
    Honestly? I'd have stopped it at two seconds... the rest is superfluous. The first two seconds gets the job done.

    Completely agree with Andy. After about 2 seconds too much starts going on. Keep it simple.
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    I agree also, the first 2 seconds were cool but then when it starts multiplying itself and everything it gets bad

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    Just to add to what's already been said about the length...
    It's a nice clean logo - good
    You have MK then productions.co.uk underneath. I presume your website is "www.mkproductions.com"and not "productions.com" or "www.productions.com"? Get my point?
    Major flaw - your tag line is misspelled! Put an apostrophe in, won't you?
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    Quote Originally Posted by TimStannard View Post
    Major flaw - your tag line is misspelled! Put an apostrophe in, won't you?
    I saw (briefly) MKproductions.co.uk.

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    Stop at 4 secs.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Marc Peters View Post
    I saw (briefly) MKproductions.co.uk.
    Interesting. Maybe this suggests that in the confusion of working out whether the name was Productions or MKproductions I didn't even get as far as the top level domain and made an assumption.

    Perhaps a bit of a "pulse" on the .co.uk would draw attention to that.

    Funnily enough, I can't see where you got MKproductions (as opposed to MKProductions) from as (quite apart from the fact that MK is displayed on a separate line) "Productions" throughout the sequence shown with a capital P. Which indicates the start of a paragraph or name.

    I still think it's a neat logo, but in need of the FULL website or domain name - mkproductions.co.uk and an apostrophe in "won't" and a chop after 4 secs.
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    Apos'trope abus'e mus't be s'tamped out.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mark W View Post
    Apos'trope abus'e mus't be s'tamped out.
    Yeah I know, I can get a bit anal about it, but I do think it's important when you're promoting you're business to get these things right.
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