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    Hey guys. Just wanted to get some feedback on a short film I shot/directed last year, THE PATRIOT TREE. I shot this film with a dvx100 and edited on FCP.





    Thanks so much,

    jeremy

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    Quote Originally Posted by jermcdee View Post
    Hey guys. Just wanted to get some feedback on a short film I shot/directed last year, THE PATRIOT TREE. I shot this film with a dvx100 and edited on FCP.
    jeremy
    First, you should have posted this in the "User Videos" section. However, I'll take a pop at it.

    The sound track and the lighting were excellent. The camera work sucked...too many hand-held looking shots. That technique has been too over used. It is long in the tooth. The slight vertical panning on master shots looked geeky, like someone trying to reset the frame on the run. Not professional.

    The male actors were all quite good. The female actor was not very convincing.

    Beyond that, I can't give any further feedback because I could not get my head around the plot.

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