Hi all, first post so be gentle

Quick summary of my work - it's not finished yet and there's a 45ish second segment at the end where it's black but that's just the song finishing so please ignore this bit. There's some tweaks I know I have to make, tidy up some of the cuts, but this is my first rough cut and I would like some outside input.

This is footage I filmed at the Animal Relentless Bike Tour 2008 in Western-Super-Mare. It's my first project I've done outside of uni (studying Broadcast Media) where I've made some documentaries and other little projects. However, this is a project I want to get to an almost 'professional' level. Editing on FCP and shot with Sony HVR-A1E.

Criticism is welcome as it's a great way to learn!

Anyway, here it is: