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    Default The Watcher 1 & 2

    The Watcher 1:
    ( removed by mark w)

    The Watcher 2:
    YouTube - The Watcher 2

    Both Videos are directed and edited by me...
    We made them up as we went along.
    I made the first one completely on my own a few days ago, then The Watcher 2 the next day.
    Last edited by Mark W; 05-25-2008 at 09:23 PM.

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    Please read the guidelines if you are a noob befor posting here.

    Only one film per post. I have therefore removed one of your submissions.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mark W View Post
    I have therefore removed one of your submissions.
    And in my opinion the wrong one! (Feel free to delete my comments about The Watcher 1, Mark)

    Chris,

    The first, a solo effort, whilst technically poor, was a much better film. The idea was better, more feasible and in the mold of Scary Movie. You acted the part totally straight and this is the only way to act a spoof.

    The Watcher 2, on the other hand, whilst slightly better technically, helped no doubt by having someone to watch what you are filming at times, was just a couple of kids mucking about.

    Choice and use of music for #1 was excellent. Barely mediocre for #2.
    Tim

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    Yeah I was thinking about removing "The Watcher 2" and remaking it with a script this time.

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    Well - I watched a bit of both and perhaps decided wrong... I went with two cos it had your mates in but one did have moments of suspense - make up your mind what you are making this time - those walks past the sofa just got too slapstick but the messages were spooky - as for the p line - looked like you ran out of ideas...

    Keep the spooky vibe and cut things shorter.

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