You had some good ideas there. You definitely needed an extra light or two to have you lit better in front of the bluescreen. Could you reshoot the bluescreen stuff? I didn't like some of the cheesy wipes you used. Towards the end where you are singing in the TV in a room didn't work. The room was too dark and it would have been better if you used After Effects to add yourself to the telly, rather than playing from a DVD and having those horrible scanlines show up.