Nice choice of music as ever.
What would have been fun would be to use the transport theme a bit more. Start with the plane, cut to the car, have some scenes on foot, cut to the subway - then each time you cut to the buildings, have the subway train doors open as if you're using the train to get around the city. Would be cool to keep increased speed.
Also, when you pan down the large building, you could reverse it and tag at the end the shot of you looking down over the city (hey, who knows they're not the same building LOL).
Just a few thoughts in my blurry eyed state. Is that the 53rd state? I'm afraid they don't get any better than that this week.