I am making a few minute clip of twins that have a Bar-Mitzvah soon and one plays basketball and one plays soccer. This clip will be shown at the Bar Mitzvah to 500 guests so that's why I want your opinion... I've only done weddings and events and this is my first clip.
I'm not making a movie for Hollywood, but I want it to be nice!
The first half will be the Basketball kid and the second half will be the soccer kid. I only did the first half so far and uploaded it for you to see before I continue.
Please give me your opinion on things that might need changing:
YouTube - Temp2