can i be the first to say.............. oh dear.
your rhymes are so boring and likewise the vids are really boring. i take it you filmed them all your self? i think if you had other people helping out it may have been a bit better it the way of better shots and ideas.
Some of the imagery could have worked if planned better. The shot ideas looked rushed and under developed. There is no coherent structure to the videos and I got bored with some shots lasting too long. The editing and pacing needed tightening a lot.