What a terrific little film! I'm very impressed!
A lot of work has gone into this video and it one of the best "school" films we've had here, but...
The sound is terrible!
Thevoice-over and dialogue is impossible to understand. Sometimes it's because the background music is too loud but mostly it's because the original sound was badly recorded. It means that we don't know what the story is!
On the positive side, the effects were well done and you obviously put a lot of work into it. As English isn't your first language I think you should be proud of yourselves!