You have good motion graphic skills and you manipulate your images very creatively. What I haven't seen yet on this or your previous videos is something with bite. Film/video is also very much about saying something, including provoactiveness. It looks pretty what you done, but apart from that, has nothing to say. It would make ideal video visuals in a nightclub, but not as a standalone piece.
Feeling my way with different themse at the moment.
I am going to be doing some visuals for a minimalist/electronica band quite soon - will post thee here for further comment.