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    Default Company Commercial

    Hey could you guys let me know what you think of my companies commercial. Lol my friend said i was a show off hehe.

    We are ready to shock the world

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    Like it, getting good with ae there, I am being left behind - I will have to get my head round it soon.

    Nice ad, maybe could have been a bit more snappy. Looked very swish.

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    I agree with Mark on this - needs to be much tighter.
    Also it could do with being much brighter. Its hard to pick you out of it as you are wearing a black shirt.

    The main thing for me though is this - The script needs a major edit! NO NEGATIVITY! and no mention of not being a professional. If I was a company watching this commercial looking to have a video done - those 2 points would make me think "NEXT!!!!" Drop the part about videos bombing and the bit about not being a professional.

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    Lots of potential but...

    I must agree with both the Marks and you need to tighten it up a bit. Also lose the negativity and "not a professional" tag. Finally when you re-shoot, improve the sound a bit and lighten up the image, you're not really standing out from the background.

    Apart from that it's not bad. Just needs "tweaking".

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    Ah ok cool beans fellas i'll work on that
    We are ready to shock the world

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