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04-01-2008, 12:30 PM
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| |  WW3: The Final Eclipse
About the video:
World war three is coming soon, so is the darkness that follows it. And when that trigger is fired, we will face our darkest fears as the greatest nations of all time; try to win over, no matter what the consequences are. YouTube - WW3: The Final Eclipse
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04-01-2008, 02:17 PM
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Comments ditto your last submission. All this angst cant be good for you....
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04-01-2008, 02:22 PM
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can't be good for me.....
what can be good for me then...?! |
04-01-2008, 03:56 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by n5division  can't be good for me.....
what can be good for me then...?! | Fluffy bunnies. |
04-01-2008, 04:01 PM
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and wat the heck does that mean!!!! |
04-01-2008, 04:24 PM
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It means that this is a video making forum, not a political or religeous forum. Your previous effort was criticised because of the bombastic choice of Hollywood music and the poor editing. This effort is much of the same.
What does come across is that you're an angry young man who can't take criticism, hence the "fluffy bunnies" comment. If you want to get a message across you need to learn to communicate. If you want to tell the world that the chinese, arabs or muslims will rule the world, that's fine but, if you're going to do it here, at least try to offer well edited material.
So, you've taken footage shot by professionals and music from Hollywood blockbusters. Nothing to criticise there since it's not your work. What is yours is the editing and that falls down heavily. To start with, you need to get a feeling for the music you're editing to. It's like a dance between the sound and images, they need to compliment each other, to move together.
I suggest you have a look at another user Video" on this forum, "The Art of War" by Cappa Esquire, which shows how images and music can work together.  |
04-02-2008, 12:38 PM
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Yes indeed.
Powerfull images plus powerful music do not make a good video without good editing.
This type of editing is like doing a pop video - much of your video was familiar to me so you need something more, you need to really cut well to the music.
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04-02-2008, 02:16 PM
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Well said..... |
04-02-2008, 11:52 PM
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