Results 1 to 5 of 5

Thread: My video entry...

  1. #1
    Sparky McJones is offline Junior Member Standard Definition
    Join Date
    Aug 2007
    Posts
    13

    Default My video entry...

    This is Pete Ross. He truly believes he is living "the good life."

    http://easylink.playstream.com/podca...al_movie-1.wvx


    This is actually a video I put together for my church.

  2. #2
    irishmark's Avatar
    irishmark is offline Your Moderatorness Video Editing Junkie
    Join Date
    Jul 2005
    Location
    London
    Posts
    1,386

    Default

    this needs to be cut alot tighter. As it is its too slow and has no pace to it.

  3. #3
    Sparky McJones is offline Junior Member Standard Definition
    Join Date
    Aug 2007
    Posts
    13

    Default

    To be honest, its 3 different videos. I've been too busy to make it all one single video.

  4. #4
    Rembrandt Rob is offline Senior Member R=E([K/N]A)+W
    Join Date
    Mar 2005
    Posts
    3,724
    Blog Entries
    2

    Default

    Mark's right, the video lacks pace. It's a pity that you didn't have time because the idea is certainly interesting and the theme could have been expanded to make a really good entry to "The Good Life".

    Some nice camerawork and editing, just a bit too slow, in my opinion. The comp ends at the end of September, still time for you to change things...

  5. #5
    Sparky McJones is offline Junior Member Standard Definition
    Join Date
    Aug 2007
    Posts
    13

    Default

    Quote Originally Posted by The Guru View Post
    Mark's right, the video lacks pace. It's a pity that you didn't have time because the idea is certainly interesting and the theme could have been expanded to make a really good entry to "The Good Life".

    Some nice camerawork and editing, just a bit too slow, in my opinion. The comp ends at the end of September, still time for you to change things...
    I'll try... no promises though. :P

    I really do appreciate the comments guys. I'm still kinda new to editing and still learning a lot. Any suggestions you guys have I'll more than gladly accept.

Similar Threads

  1. Entry from Mark Wataon.
    By Mark W in forum Competition: "La Dolce Vita" (The Good Life)
    Replies: 14
    Last Post: 07-27-2007, 08:48 AM
  2. My entry
    By cgstorm in forum Summer Competition 2006!
    Replies: 6
    Last Post: 08-16-2006, 03:04 AM
  3. Help with film entry DVD- please !!
    By Dean B in forum Blu Ray, DVD, SVCD and VCD authoring
    Replies: 5
    Last Post: 05-01-2005, 07:13 PM
  4. More on competition entry music.
    By Alan Mills in forum Digital Director Video Contest 04
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 10-13-2004, 09:06 PM
  5. My Entry...
    By 98lwatso in forum Create a Trailer or Advert (Closed)
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: 07-23-2004, 04:53 AM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •