Everyone can get so involved in the tech end of film and video creation that they sometimes forget what makes a film---> "story telling". This is even seen in the film industry today and most notably online on sites like youtube. I made a quick and sort of crazy video (I was Grip, graffer(lol), actor and director so judge the very short film using those factors in mind..lol but it does show the point of the video) discussing storytelling and the hero's journey. If any of you guys are new to film making, the story is the most important part of your movie.

I agree totally.

I suggest you post the video in user vids if you want feedback. More likely to get watched there.