Well, isn't this place lovely?

Mikefishcake told me that this is a good place to get some decent constructive critisism on my videos, and so here I am. I've only been making videos seriously for just over a year, so please don't be too harsh. At the same time, I want to improve, so if you have any suggestions, go right ahead. Well here goes:

Myself and a friend have made a series of short comedy videos, there's going to be four in the series eventually, but we've only filmed the first three so far.

Part 1 - 12MB
Part 2 - 8.5MB
Part 3 - 15MB

They're all in DivX format. You need to Right click, "save as...". If you left click you get my 403 forbidden page.

Cheers.