Hi Clay9
OK, it feels good all except the first 60 seconds, I feel there is too much jumping around in the edit from camera to camera, it is very distracting, especially when you are trying to get a good look at whos there.
The trick about editing is not to reveal the cameras, this jumping around shouts camera to me.
You don't have to have the person talking always on screen, be brave have some off screen lines.
The line girlfriend cheating on her maybe should have been a ECU, its a important line, we need to see a full face delivery.
I will say this line again, Faces are more interesting than Places (this includes bus stops) I will have to have this attached to my rocket at the bottom.
Maybe the introduction of the second person could have been pulled off as a mysterious arrival, a shadow passing by, His hello said off screen via a close up of Matt and his reply keeping the reveal mysterious as well, maybe I'm wrong, but there are not too many options when all you have is two guys, a bus stop and God.
It just the beginning, it settles down and is a well delivered video, just go in and ease up the editing at the start.
I did watch this video 4 times over, I hope you understand my thoughts on your video.
The Mad Bomber.
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