Thanks a lot for your comments.
Actually I'm preparing a director's cut. Cause I'd like to perform the last chorus of the film. I would like to improve by working more progress so we feel a rise and a change in the last part of the song.

This is the contest cut, I didn't have the time to make it on the first version you watched.

What do you think of that ? Any ideas to improve the editing ?
Thanks

Marty

French film director and editor
my last music video :Moby - Ooh yeah (contest music video) on Vimeo
website : MARTIN GEISLER