I watched your video and thought it was alright. There were a few things I would change in it and they are the first and second titles are not onscreen long enough to read, change 'Security Camera 01' to something else, I think you gave three views so they could have been 'Cam 01', 'Cam 02' and 'Cam 03' instead. Or what about 'Kitchen Cam', 'Fridge Cam' and 'Floor Cam', I think you could have played around with this idea of where the camera's could have been located. Security cameras just give the time and date onscreen.

Again, the shots are too long, the camera is shaky in some scenes and you could have taken out the first scene of the cat in its basket after we leave Mario, cut to the title screen and then cut to the graphic with the crosshair, this would have shortened the video as there was no need for two scenes of the cat in its basket.

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