It's great to see BMX Barry again, and the rest of the guys throwing themselves through the walls. Is that you doing the voice over? If it is, you need to slow down a bit in the delivery and take a few breaks as it is just one continuous speech. Put in a few commas and full stops in the script, count 1,2 after each full stop and 1 after each comma (but not out loud).
It is a mistake non professional voice over 'artistes' make - that you have to rattle on and on at break neck speed to reach the end, when the opposite is really what is required. If you listen to documentaries or nature programmes on tv (yes, I said listen, not watch) the person talking leaves lots of gaps and lets the pictures do the work. Other than that it made me laugh again, it must be great having a job like that where all you do is break stuff.
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