I watched your video tribute to Gene Simmons, you must be a big fan of his? I would have preferred to have heard your voice without the audio post processing, could you do your next video without any audio effects so we can hear your voice? Your voice was overwhelmed at times with the music and was difficult to hear?

You were miming to it?, if you want to do that you either need to do it 100% or it just brings back really bad memories of bands and singers on Top Of The Pops 20 years ago miming. They got a lot of stick for it and rightly so.

Possibly better lighting in your next video, it is summertime, try and do your next video outdoors. Camera angles need to be changed, shot sizes need to be varied more and either move the camera deliberately or keep it still.

In music videos you can get away with using more transitions but don't go overboard, choose three that suit the style of music and its tempo and use them.

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